viletta+ougi=love

[csakura.livejournal.com]

since there's no ep. this weekend..

title: uncertainty
rating: pg13? i'd say only sexual references..
words: 720
summary: from viletta and ougi's POV when they meet each other in r2 ep. 8, thinking about the past
notes: my first, lol. if you like, pls comment. if you hate, pls spare my pride! (i'll get the hint)

(you know what to do)

Comments

[gods-debris.livejournal.com]

Good story, but when you switch PoV be sure to mark accordingly... for example "* * *" centered separating the two character points of view. Sometimes when you switch to another person's point of view readers get confused and have to backtrack thinking they missed something.

For your first, gj.

[csakura.livejournal.com]

yeah about the *** i put them in and then took them out loads of times. in the end they stayed out cause i thought the piece was short anyways. but thanks so much for your thoughts and thanks for reading :)