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[cranes.livejournal.com]

Finally mustered up the courage to post this here. Quick now, before I change my mind. :x

Title: To Keep Your Pretty Ghost From Chasing Me
Pairing: Suzaku/Lelouch
Rating: PG-13
Genre: drabble, tragedy
Summary: An AU take on the ending of R2. Or rather, how it happened in my head.
A/N: There were so many different ideas I had in mind for this one. I wish I could have written them all, however, there is only so much patience one has for words at 6 am.

The deafening din of the crowd below buzzed inside his head as he plunged his sword deep inside His Majesty's body. His stomach churned something awful at the feeling of the blade contorting through skin and muscle, Lelouch's ragged breath wrecking his tired frame.   This was the end, and oh, take me with you, he pleaded in silence behind the mask. For him there was climax, no moral, no lesson learned. Just more cold blood on the hands of a liar. Tears poured freely from his eyes now as his beloved Lelouch fell limp in his arms. I'm sorry, Your Majesty.   For anyone else, a stab wound to the abdomen would result fatal. But Kururugi Suzaku, Knight of Zero, was a remarkable swordsman. Aware of every pressure point, every vital organ that barely slipped past the blade, every heartbeat that stained flawless white robe with crimson. But for now, at least...   Suzaku the soldier was trained to kill. Suzaku the knight was disciplined to carry out orders. But right now, Suzaku the man was determined to save a life. "Live on."

Comments

[icedcandy.livejournal.com]

Um. WHY DIDN'T I COMMENT WHEN YOU POSTED THIS ON YOUR LJ. I don't know. Maybe because I hadn't seen the last ep. yet.

Now, reading it again, it just has a bigger impact on me, I guess. Uguu ;^;

[krazykrow.livejournal.com]

TT.TT god..how i hope that really happened..

[get-in-get-out.livejournal.com]

Oh my God, this is great. ♥

I'm putting this in my memories.

[abyssed.livejournal.com]

THIS.

This is too amazing. This totally replaces actual canon in my brain. It makes everything about that episode hurt less too,

Amazing job, and Short but so right to the point and AWESOME.

Putting this in my memories for sure. <3

[nanakibh.livejournal.com]

brb, pretending this is what happened.

[rinkura.livejournal.com]

Meming this here. It still gets to me. @_;

(frozen comment)

[acidtrips.livejournal.com]

I would've came had it not been PG:13.
FAILURE.
And wait. why post it on code_geass [[not in your journal]], are you a dumb ass or something?
You should make your own com, bro.
That'd be cool yah no.
rly cool.
Not really.
I'd probably just stare and say "Oh hay" then go read some awesome maka/death scythe, cos that's how I roll.
I wouldn't say "Oh Hay" out loud, but on the computer.
Because that's how I rollx2.
Dear god.
GOOD LUCK WITH THAT.

[vielbritannia.livejournal.com]

I AM SO BELIEVING THAT THIS HAPPENED, NOW.

[anubuko.livejournal.com]

AGH THANK YOU FOR ENLIGHTENING ME. ;-;
This is wonderful, really.
Enjoyed reading every word of it.

[chickee1.livejournal.com]

Pretty　;.;

[strike-x-slash.livejournal.com]

Oh, I wish.

[orenjuhimechan.livejournal.com]

dfsdf ; AAA; LET ME BELIEVE THAT THIS IS WHAT HAPPENED OKAY
RABURABU

[keleosnoonna.livejournal.com]

KYAAA!! I LOVE YOU!! THIS IS DEFINITELY GONNA BE MY CANON XD

[whitedestiny1x2.livejournal.com]

AERGH, THE POSSIBILITIES!!!!!!!! Very nice. So short but not lacking in power and emotion. The repetition at the end is an awesome build up to the last two words. Gahhh. Great job.