Wooow...(wipes foggy glasses). That's really some story you've written there. Definitely the best Suzakun X Kallen hatesex I've seen so far. I've read it like 5 times over and over already.
I kinda liked the "ungentlemanly" Suzaku. Dark & Sexy. :P And darling Kallen, I just LOVED whenever that little spitfire got on Suzaku's nerves.
Seriously, you did very well on this, bringing Suzaku and Kallen's hate for each other into the bedroom and turning it into a steamy battle of wills. Also, the part where they paused, unsure if they should continue, was a nice touch.
You definitely HAVE to write that sequel you're thinking of (will be so depressed if you don't). I can totally see them getting back in the sack again. After all, if I can't get enuf of them, I'm sure they can't get enuf of each other. hahaha :D
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I kinda liked the "ungentlemanly" Suzaku. Dark & Sexy. :P And darling Kallen, I just LOVED whenever that little spitfire got on Suzaku's nerves.
Seriously, you did very well on this, bringing Suzaku and Kallen's hate for each other into the bedroom and turning it into a steamy battle of wills. Also, the part where they paused, unsure if they should continue, was a nice touch.
You definitely HAVE to write that sequel you're thinking of (will be so depressed if you don't). I can totally see them getting back in the sack again. After all, if I can't get enuf of them, I'm sure they can't get enuf of each other. hahaha :D