Your description of Lulu's physical appearance and the paragraph about the artists' varying fancies are lovely. The characterisation also befits real-life teenage boys in their keenness to "explore" and "no meaning, no commitment" mindset. And finally, thank you for steering clear off cliched terms/expressions/euphemisms! I hope you'd write more, but angst is probably not first on everyone's list at the moment ^_~.
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