This is excellent. I really love the last line, very chilling effect here. And it does make you think, for the boys, whose act of self-justification would end up falling the hardest? (This is one of my favourite themes for the series) Wonderful work! Fandom doesn't have enough Lelouch+Suzaku fic, sadly.
You might want to edit for formatting, though. A few sentences were cut off in the middle, and I think your third paragraph isn't where it's meant to be. It definitely hurts the stylistic effect.
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You might want to edit for formatting, though. A few sentences were cut off in the middle, and I think your third paragraph isn't where it's meant to be. It definitely hurts the stylistic effect.