[identity profile] verity-isle.livejournal.com 2006-11-27 01:08 am (UTC)(link)
Defeated bear! I can't believe I got that kanji wrong. XD

Good work! You did several places better than mine here, though in others we'll have to agree to disagree. XD

[identity profile] kowaiki.livejournal.com 2006-11-27 01:21 am (UTC)(link)
You did great too! I think our translations are pretty close though other than the "kuma" bit^^ Your translation for the conversations sound more natural than mine. I just translated them directly.

[identity profile] verity-isle.livejournal.com 2006-11-27 01:27 am (UTC)(link)
It is? Then t's probably the benefit of trying to write dialogue-heavy fics lately. ^^; Yeah, it's pretty close, but there's a few wording here and there, and how we translated the passive form of 'summary' up there...you got the feel better than mine in a lot of places, though, like those semi-sound effect stuff. XD

And we both are confused about the pipe thing. What pipe thing?