[identity profile] selenityshiroi.livejournal.com 2006-11-26 10:09 pm (UTC)(link)
What on earth is Millay doing to Shirley to make her shriek like that?!?

Either Millay is groping Shirley or she's just told her what Suzaku and Lulu are doing behind the bike sheds!

[identity profile] selenityshiroi.livejournal.com 2006-11-26 10:26 pm (UTC)(link)
I VOTE FOR BOTH!!!

[identity profile] asdhjfbciwu3487.livejournal.com 2006-11-26 10:27 pm (UTC)(link)
I vote the latter as well... except they should let us see T_T

Both is fine too.

[identity profile] verity-isle.livejournal.com 2006-11-27 12:44 am (UTC)(link)
Ahaha, dude, it's actually SO tame. The author was the guy who wrote the Hoshi no Koe novelization...which means he isn't that good, but hey.

Translation!

What should I do? What should I do? What should I do? I shouldn't have seen that. It'd be awfully nice if I'm just mistaken somewhere...but, but no matter how you look at that atmosphere...no! I don't believe it!

Oh, I'm so shaken up right now...

"What are you doing, Shirley?"

Eh, Millay!?

"Don't make that broody face and pace around the council hall all so nervous like that, okay?"

Um, okay...

"You look like you've got a whole a whole apartment falling on you. It's a little scary."

...I looked like that?

"Uh-huh. And if you don't mind, do stop writhing around on the floor and banging your head on the wall, too. It's very scary."

Eh, I did that!?

"Hmm? Oh yes, that was just a little lie."

Mi-lla-y~~~~!!

"Ahahaha. And? What's up with Lelouch?"

Bingo, but! Please just stop getting it right in one burst like that! Is she secretly a genius...?

"Hmmmmmmmm. Lelouch acts like he's been dating with someone lately. Saw Lelouch and Kallen asking each other out with some sort of secret meaning. Saw Lelouch and Kallen k-i-s-s-i-n-g in the garden. Could Lulu and Kallen possibly be dating? So that's it."

Yeah, though it really hurts inside to hear it being summarized so calmly like that...

"All right, let's start a broken heart party."

NO!

"Oh, it'll be fun. You'll get to say "Men, men, men and their ilk~!!" and whirl around a beam. All whirly whirly like this."

We don't know if that's even really the case yet!

"There's that. We'll have to confirm it with the culprits, then. I wonder if Kallen would answer if you ask her."

Eh!?

"Shall I ask for you?"

No! No, I'll do it myself!

"So? What a shame..."

A shame?

"Say, can I be hiding like a fly on the wall when you do ask?"

No. Absolutely not.


[identity profile] verity-isle.livejournal.com 2006-11-27 12:55 am (UTC)(link)
Yes. XD And so far, this is a rather average fluff one. I demand the one where she made the seitokai wear swimsuits to class. Seriously.

Hey, maybe her arranged marriage candidate is Lloyd! He could be from a wealthy family, just a little eccentric! Where else would he get the money for his Lancelot research if the military didn't really condone it?

[identity profile] verity-isle.livejournal.com 2006-11-27 01:06 am (UTC)(link)
I know! And he has those weird poses, which would make family life never boring. He's just like Morita from Hachikuro. I'm sure the kids would love him, too, and he'd take them on his mech as guinea pigs...but hey, it's cute!

Embarrassed Lelouch is way, way better than Embarrassed Shirley. This has been scientifically proven. LooseScrew!Lelouch FTW! And really, we need to see how he got out of that "What indeed..." scene. Oh, and we're cruel? I thought we're exceedingly nice. We do pair him up with his heart's desire (in any embarrassing way possible) frequently, after all.

[identity profile] verity-isle.livejournal.com 2006-11-27 01:25 am (UTC)(link)
My favourite was the one where he was all NO CUE TODAY OUT WITH YOU CONGRATULATIONS in episode 7. It's his voice. His voice was just awesome!

He isn't as fast a talker as he'd like us to think. XD That line was so incredibly lame and funny. And does he just have one casual clothes or what? He's always lending it to girls!

Not that I know, though he might like to. XD In fluff and angst and general romance, Suzaku totally tops Lelouch in fandom. (That's the price of being reticient with your feelings, Lulu) Darkfic, though, is where Lelouch reigns supreme. The Eye of Geass is like a walking game cheat, after all. And darkfics make people act all kinds of OOC.

And I know! The first time they got to speak for more than two sentences in seven years, and Suzaku left him heartbroken. Poor Lelouch. They so need a marriage counselor here. XD

[identity profile] verity-isle.livejournal.com 2006-11-27 01:42 am (UTC)(link)
Yes. :D And he's plotty, too, which makes him even better. The Britannian royals should just take his example and let some crack in their lives. Like Euphemia should put frogs in Cornelia's coffee or something.

I want to see a scene where Lelouch withdraws money from his bank account and discovers it's all gone and has to track down---hey, actually, that could work for a fic. XD And the women either tried to cut his wrist or point a gun at him!

Did you notice Lulu goes blah blah blah a lot? There's his SEIGI blah blah blah in Episode 8, too. I nearly died with the "seigi no mikata" script. Suzaku just acts like what any well-adjusted person would do. XD He's really a very well-adjusted boy, and Lelouch is...just not. Which is why he has so many gaping holes for crack, despite how much he tries to be perfect. Remember how the writer said Lulu would research for days and hit the wrong store, and Suzaku could just walk around and get it right? XD

[identity profile] kowaiki.livejournal.com 2006-11-27 01:05 am (UTC)(link)
Another version of the tranlsation!

Our days

New series

What should I do? What should I do? What should I do? I saw something terrible. I want to think I've mistaken...but no matter how I look at it, that kind of atmosphere...no! How can that be!

Ah, panic panic...

"What are you doing, Shirely?"

Eh, Millay!?

"Don't stroll around the student representatives meeting room with a face like you're in deep thought."

Ah, yeh...

"You look like you're a defeated bear who had been cast away, it's a bit scary."

...I was like that?

"Yep. Let's stop rolling on your bed and hitting your forehead on the wall as well. It's very scary."

Eh, I, did such thing!?

"Yeh? That was a lie."

Mi~llay~!

"Hahaha. Well? What happened to Lelouch?"

Bingo! Don't get it in the first go like that please. It is true...*

*T/N: Tentative translation for that last sentence.

"Hmm. Lelouch is acting like he's dating someone lately. I saw Lelouch asked Karen out to speak to her privately. And I saw Lelouch and Karen kissed in the garden. I just think may be Lelouch and Karen are going out. That's what it is."

Though it hurts my heart to have to summarise it like that calmly...

"Ok, it's throw a sorry party."

No!!

"It'd be fun. Saying 'Guys, guys~' while rolling up tube*. Like this, roll and roll."

*T/N: Not sure about rolling up tube...they're making their own cigarette?

It's not like we know for certain this is true or not yet!

"That's right, we need to confirm it from the person in matter. If we ask Karen she probably won't answer us."

What?!

"Should I ask for you?"

No! I'll do it myself!

"Is that so? What a shame..."

A shame?

"Hey, can I stand and listen as I hide while you do it?"

Definitely no, please.

[identity profile] verity-isle.livejournal.com 2006-11-27 01:08 am (UTC)(link)
Defeated bear! I can't believe I got that kanji wrong. XD

Good work! You did several places better than mine here, though in others we'll have to agree to disagree. XD

[identity profile] kowaiki.livejournal.com 2006-11-27 01:21 am (UTC)(link)
You did great too! I think our translations are pretty close though other than the "kuma" bit^^ Your translation for the conversations sound more natural than mine. I just translated them directly.

[identity profile] verity-isle.livejournal.com 2006-11-27 01:27 am (UTC)(link)
It is? Then t's probably the benefit of trying to write dialogue-heavy fics lately. ^^; Yeah, it's pretty close, but there's a few wording here and there, and how we translated the passive form of 'summary' up there...you got the feel better than mine in a lot of places, though, like those semi-sound effect stuff. XD

And we both are confused about the pipe thing. What pipe thing?