Haha, thanks. x3 I don't have a beta, but I'm generally pretty obsessive about my grammar, etc. I'm not really sure how much more I can beef the anticipation as this has already been fluffed up from its original 770 words, but I may keep tweaking it at work today. I think I'll keep the ending though; I like that it seems like a super ordinary incident that was of no consequence. Thanks for all the feedback though! It seems hard to come by sometimes. xD
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