I REALLY like this concept, and I think what you've written so far is awesome! There's just one minor problem I noticed...I hope you don't mind me pointing it out X_X It seems weird to me that Lelouch would bring up Suzaku helping him to destroy Britannia when they've only just met again after a long time. All Lelouch knows is that Suzaku's in the military and maybe has some qualms about killing civilians. I feel like they should have maybe discussed Suzaku's opinions about Britannia before Lelouch suggests anything. Otherwise, for all Lulu knows, Suzaku's so far into Britannia's camp that at best he would flat-out refuse.
Please don't hate me for bringing this up T_T I just think the idea is awesome!, but I know from experience in writing fic that plot holes suck majorly ;_; Whether you take this advice or not, please keep writing this! ^^ And thanks for sharing~
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Please don't hate me for bringing this up T_T I just think the idea is awesome!, but I know from experience in writing fic that plot holes suck majorly ;_; Whether you take this advice or not, please keep writing this! ^^ And thanks for sharing~