Shattered Mirror CH5

[angel-gospel.livejournal.com]

AN: Playing on the fact that Kamui and Lulu are near identicle. I have seen some fics recently that went into this, but I wrote this baby when Code Geass first came out. Mwua ha, if anyone asks who was the first to play on this coicidence--or was it? Nothing is a coincidence, after all--you can answer that it was me. ^^

Title: Shattered Mirror
Author: angel_gospel 
Disclaimer: I don't own Code Gess, xHolic, or X19. I do own some random ocs who aren't that important to the plot.
Warnings: There will be slash, language, violence, and strange dreams.
Genre: Angst, romance, drama, supernatural
Pairings: FuumaxKamui, SubaruxKamui, Mentions of SubaruxSeishiro, SuzakuxLelouch, FuumaxLelouch, SubaruxLelouch, mentions of other CLAMP pairings.
Summary: Lelouch is given a chance for redemption when, after being shot by Suzaku, he is transported to a new world and a new love. Subaru finds a mysterious boy who resembles a dead boy, way too close to his heart. Fuuma's now normal life is torn apart when 'Kamui' abrubtly returns from the dead. And Yuuko laughs while watching all this.
Previous chapters:  Prologue Chapter One Chapter Two Chapter Three Chapter Four

Chapter Five Excerpt: Lelouch was standing idly in the kitchen, wearing his new school uniform, flipping something, with a pink apron worn over all that.

Comments

[angel-gospel.livejournal.com]

Random in a good or bad way? I thrive on random. My icon is actually from a game, though it does have a movie and a short anime. It's Cloud and Zack from Final Fantasy VII. Zack is also the protagonist in Crisis Core. The anime they're both in is called Last Order. And the movie is a pretty cool on called Final Fantasy VII: Advent Children.

[angel-gospel.livejournal.com]

lol It's okay. Someone thought it was Fai and Kurogane before. ^^ I actually like the angle. It looks really sweet, in a romantic or friendship related way. :)

[krazykrow.livejournal.com]

yay!! you updated!!! ^^ <333 i think this is a unique and interesting story and i enjoyed the first four chapters a few weeks back and i was really looking forward to your update. ^^ although i think lelouch is a bit ooc i still love him! ^^ from the very beginning i was greatly looking forward to fuumas reaction when he saw lelouch and i liked it in this chapter. ^^ lol not to mention lulu in an pink apron. <3 ^^ well i look forward to your future updates! cant wait to see lulu and fuuma actually interacting and such! ^^

[angel-gospel.livejournal.com]

^^ I'm really happy you like it. Lelouch will be less OoC from now on. He's just shy around Subaru because he gives him Suzaku vibes and he doesn't want things to end badly with Subaru, like they did with Suzaku. I'm glad you liked Fuuma's reaction. The pink apron thing was pure fansevice. --Grins-- They should interact, meaning Fuuma and Kamui, in a chapter or two. Probably the next one. ^^

[angel-gospel.livejournal.com]

Okay, I'll admit, it started off horribly when I started off, but this, other than my fiction on crack, was that first thing that I've ever written save for a school project or two. I had a problem with past and present tense before, and because I started on present tense when I first wrote the chapter, a while ago, when Code Geass was still a show that no one watched, and when, if you typed it in on the Google search engine, it said Code Grass rather than Geass, so yeah, it's pretty bad in the beginning--heck, even I wince sometimes when I see the first chapter---but I have since gotten better. The reason I think so is not because I'm immodest, but because I've not only read a whole lot more to get better at the basics, I've written a lot more. And, though you call it mediocre, I must be doing something right if my review limit was met--and more--in the hours since I updated. My other stories have been pretty well fed on the reviews too. It hasn't even been a full day yet. No one has ever called me mediocre before you, so I want to thank you for being the first. Thanks for not giving me any useful ConCrit, though you did a wonderful job of putting me down. You're an author's best friend. ^^ --Hugs--

[angel-gospel.livejournal.com]

Okay, then don't. People have preferances. If you view ff.net that way, then it is well within your rights to avoid it. ^^ Have a good day.

[geass-fatale.livejournal.com]

I-i just wanted to say ilu for this. oAo

...I know for a fact that the first episode of Code Geass, I totally had a 'Lelouch =\= Kamui, yes/no?' moment. XD And since then I think everyone's caught onto the whole LelouchNunnallySuzaku and KamuiKotoriFuuma childhood friends thing I almost expected Nunnally to die to save Lelouch, and definitely the whole best friend / worst enemy thing. So a Code Geass/X story has totally been overdue... yet you're the only one to have written it! XD Con~grat~u~la~tions~ <3

...slightly sad it wasn't taken at the end of Code Geass just so there can be even MORE comparisons to the way Kamui and Lelouch died. XD But it's your stories and I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more~

[angel-gospel.livejournal.com]

lol When I wrote it, Code Geass hadn't even ended yet. The second season was just starting, so I had no idea that end would be so much like X19. But I plan to put an alternate beginning sometime later on, now that I know how it's supposed to end. I'm glad you liked it otherwise, though. ^^