Code Geass: A World Abandoned [LelouchxShirley]

[nobodyman9.livejournal.com]

I've been writing this story for some time and I finally uploaded it to Fanfiction.net. I plan for this story to run for quite a while, so I hope you all enjoy it.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5332401/1/Code_Geass_A_World_Abandoned

Comments

[yinake.livejournal.com]

Okay, sold! I'll read this when I have the time. ^^

Just one suggestion, though: maybe you could make the summary a bit more exciting? Because when I originally saw this fic on ff.net, I glossed over it despite liking the pairing, seeing as how the summary seemed a bit bland. But peeking into it and reading your notes, it does seem like a really original concept.

Just my 0.2 Yen. ^^'

Will leave you a review when I get around to reading this. <3

[nobodyman9.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the suggestion. I did feel kind of iffy about the summary, but they only give me so many words to use ^_^; I'll see what I can do.