This is actually the script to the first half of my possible Lelouch/Suzaku doujinshi in the making. I wasn't planning on posting it anywhere but I would really like feedback for the Suzaku-side of the story, so I'm posting this.
I would like to know if you feel it's more suitable in this story/doujnshi for Lelouch's feelings (at least in this case) to be more or less one-sided. If it should end with requited or unrequited feelings, so to say. Let me know how you feel about this piece or even the pairing in general.
Any sort of feedback would be lovely, thanks in advance (*A*
ANYWAY:
[title] untitled
[author] myself
[wordcount] 418
[pairing/rating] Lelouch -> Suzaku (?) / PG
[notes/warnings] A bit cliché and kind of emo X_x; I don't write much, and it's a bit choppy and all over the place and more image-y to help me remember visuals, because it's actually a script/outline for a doujinshi, but I hope it flows well enough for readers to get the gist of it.
xposted to
suzalulu, sorry to those of you seeing doubles!
( sort-of-fic )
( sketches/practice )
I would like to know if you feel it's more suitable in this story/doujnshi for Lelouch's feelings (at least in this case) to be more or less one-sided. If it should end with requited or unrequited feelings, so to say. Let me know how you feel about this piece or even the pairing in general.
Any sort of feedback would be lovely, thanks in advance (*A*
ANYWAY:
[title] untitled
[author] myself
[wordcount] 418
[pairing/rating] Lelouch -> Suzaku (?) / PG
[notes/warnings] A bit cliché and kind of emo X_x; I don't write much, and it's a bit choppy and all over the place and more image-y to help me remember visuals, because it's actually a script/outline for a doujinshi, but I hope it flows well enough for readers to get the gist of it.
xposted to
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( sort-of-fic )
( sketches/practice )
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