[fanfic]: "Pavlov's Dog" (Lulu/Suzu, spoilers for stage 24/25)

[kill-me-faster.livejournal.com]

I am v. v. VERY nervous to be posting in this comm, because this fic is ass, and it even SAYS somewhere in this community info not to post things that are clearly ass. But, alas, I worked pretty hard on it and my friend Hope convinced me it was worth sharing. (Albeit littered with typing errors? Did I fix those, Hope? Have I, yet again, failed to prove my worth as a fic-writing human being?) Oh, well, here it is anyway:

Title: Pavlov's Dog
Author: Lorelei DiAngelo
Rating: Hard R, doesn't quite make it to NC-17? Should be locked, really, just to be safe, but OH WELL I'M LAZY. Needs decidingly less prose and decidingly moar secks.
Pairing: Lulu/Suzu. Mmmm.
Summary: Lelouch lies when it suits him, but he rarely goes back on his word.
For: hopechan. Thanks for suffering through my endless "I SUCK" rants and posting lots of lovely fic for me at my bossy, selfish requests. ♥ Also, mmmm, Zero/Karen S&M porn, whenever you get it done.

Word Count: 11,841. My, that's a little embarrassing. ^___^;;


( Lelouch Lamperouge stares down the barrel of a gun and realizes that this will only be the third person he has ever shot in his entire life. (fake LJ-cut!) )

Fake cut goes to my shared writing blog, eternally_sky.

[EDIT]: Since I went fic-hunting during the course of writing this, it occurs to me that lb_x has pretty much written a fic about the exact same thing, and, uh...far better than I did. Now I'm REALLY ashamed to be posting this, but by the time I found out about that fic this one was half-finished, so. *sigh*

Comments

[herongale]

Ah, memories. I'm sure your fic is not ass.

[kill-me-faster.livejournal.com]

Hahahaha, what's memories? My obnoxious setup for fanfic posts, or the fact that I'm always declaring everything I write to be ass? XD;; Or all of the above?

[herongale]

All of the above! You're too self abnegating. :D

[x-reggg.livejournal.com]

the rule just means, don't go "omg i think this is the worst thing i've ever done but i'm going to post it anyways" XDD

[kill-me-faster.livejournal.com]

Hahahha, hey, I didn't say it was the WORST thing I've ever done. ;) Just figured that I should be cautious, considering that I haven't been in fandom for a while and all.

[x-reggg.livejournal.com]

haha, well not worst, but not that good? XD

[kill-me-faster.livejournal.com]

In the end, I just decided to go for broke, 'cuz hey, nothing ventured, nothing gained. *laugh* I figured I could always just whine to my secret sockpuppet hordes of LJ friends about what a TERRIBLE BUNCH OF MEEN JEALUZ GIRLZ you all were if somebody were to tell me I should never blacken the good name of the Internets with my crapfic again. XD

[x-reggg.livejournal.com]

if it was really that bad, someone would have said so XD i personally don't read fanfics much, so i would never know XDD

hahahaha i'm glad you posted it tho, it seems well reviewed :D