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[darksage29.livejournal.com]

MY FIRST CODE GEASS FANFIC EVAR.
Title: World End
Author:
darksage29
  (alternatively known as Steven Watemaker on FF.net)
Requester:
ypaladinofchaos
 
Pairing(s)/Character(s): Rolo/Nunnally, appearance by Sayoko, mentions of Lelouch and Kallen
Rating/Warning(s): T, Rolo-centric, may include out of character-ness
Author's Notes: The fic is a sort of songfic, inspired from the new opening. This pairing was a challenge to write, and I don't think my usual fluff style would fit it, given the background of these characters. This is the first time I've written a Code Geass fanfic, the first one I've written for a fic exchange, and my first pseudo-songfic ever. :3

[pseudo-songfic] During an Order of The Black Knights operation, Rolo falls in love with someone he didn't expect.

(Everything is Heart.)

Comments

[hibiemi.livejournal.com]

I'm not very fond of FF.net, but first of all, I say kudos to you writing a RoloNana fic! :D I kinda like the possibility of this pairing. And I did like the premise of this fic, too. But what I find very iffy is the abruptness of the action between Rolo and Nunnally, which eventually leads to OOC-ness for Rolo. If you took the time to draw the action out longer, make it build up, it would be much better, IMO :D

But hey, for a first fic, it's not bad :D Cheers!