Point to Me

[aoi-rein.livejournal.com]

I hope it's alright to post something like this. Well, I'll straight to the point, that is it seems like my posts lately (2 posts in a row) no comment at all. I won't deny I feel disappointed about it but my intention to write this is because I wanna know the problem. I know I'm not a good writer but except that I like to know my other weaknesses as well. Can all of you kindly point out to me? I can accept whatever you say but please, no flaming. Thank you. Here's my latest post, as a reference:
http://community.livejournal.com/code_geass/938817.html