Point to Me

[aoi-rein.livejournal.com]

I hope it's alright to post something like this. Well, I'll straight to the point, that is it seems like my posts lately (2 posts in a row) no comment at all. I won't deny I feel disappointed about it but my intention to write this is because I wanna know the problem. I know I'm not a good writer but except that I like to know my other weaknesses as well. Can all of you kindly point out to me? I can accept whatever you say but please, no flaming. Thank you. Here's my latest post, as a reference:
http://community.livejournal.com/code_geass/938817.html
 

Comments

[seikita.livejournal.com]

I'm posting out here 'cause... I know feed back is love. And I kinda feel responsible you don't get feedback? .____.

Not like I ever comment or read. And it's sad, 'cause I just read your entry and I would have liked to read it sooner, when my brain was exploting from the episode, now I have cooled down and I really wouldn't know how to comment without making the same point you did... or, well, I think I forgot what were my thoughts at the moment.

I can't tell you what your lacks are, I'm not an english speaker myself and so I wouldn't know that much, plus, I hate writing essays and things like those and so I won't be of any help.

I can just say I would have liked to read it sooner, one of the things that kills me about reading the discussions for each episode is how they just point out and no one bothers to look deeper on what has just happened. I like this kind of insights for most of the time I don't get those things myself and when I'm all turned on by the episode I really appreaciate those facts. I might be able to comment more, but I always get in this things when it's kinda late v____V

Maybe the problem is you don't write something that will make people go to the cut? It seems to be, if I had seen your entry, I would have go past it, there's many discussions and they are mostly about the same things, the ones I click say more about what they are about.

Apart from that, I can't really advice you on anything else. Although, I promise I'll pay attention to your user so next time I see you I'll go read what's about, of course, if you still care to write about it .____. -And I hope you do =P

-Seika.

[aoi-rein.livejournal.com]

Firstly I wanna say: it's a relief! *phew*

Thank you for leaving your comment here, if not I really dunno what to do. Really, I'm feeling all anxious about it, such as did I writing some crap that no one feel like bother at all, too long, or even did I get "blacklisted"? T_T So hearing you say that really help me out.

So it might be a cut problem, yea...after all it's a language problem. Seems like I don't make it clear enough. Usually,I don't write about each episode but write when I feel wanna write about it. So maybe it's the randomness of my post cause no one to bother? *sigh* Still, this community has a lot of members but...Thanx for your advice, no worry, it won't stop me from writing any longer, if I feel like to write.